dear writer could you please apply my teacher comments on my paper, and please highlights your editing.
1. Concerned with quantitative data-analysis, there are only reports of descriptive statistics. While you did the statistical analysis such as the calculations of correlations between the participants’ responses to each of a certain pair of questionnaire items, you didn’t include its interpretation in the reports;
2. For the analysis of the qualitative data, there should be more organized reports. That is, along with emerging themes/topics from the data, you’re supposed to present your interpretation and discussion which would be supported by representative quotes from the data. Currently, it was mainly displaying each participant’s responses. In addition, for the qualitative analysis, there need to be at least two raters including yourself, and the interrater reliability must be reported, which should be 0.8 or higher. A rater should be at least MA holder in the field of applied linguistics, English education or TESOL;
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3. Since you employed MMR, there should be comprehensive analysis involving two types of data for your interpretation and discussion. Currently, each type of data-analysis was presented in a separate manner. Even so, there is no summary paragraph at the end of each type of analysis, either.
4 . Grammar mistakes, and the readability of the figures should be taken care of as well;
5. Use past-tense throughout the paper since the research was now done.
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